This is our finished production.
Friday, 3 May 2013
Evaluation Q1 - Conventions
In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?
Our group decided that certain aspects of our slasher opening would have to be similar to previous successful slasher films so that we could target a specific audience.
TITLES
The first titles displayed are 'Fireline presents', like in the slasher film Madhouse (William Butler, 2004) except in Madhouse's case it was 'Lions Gate Productions'. This is a commonly used convention. Also in our production we used a convention shown in slashers such as Urban Legend. We displayed 'A cupkate Production', similar to Urban Legend saying 'a Gina Matthews Production'. As shown in Scary Movie (Keenen Ivory Wayans, 2000), the title of the film is shown after the first killing. We did this in our slasher opening after the scream queens death and similarly to Scary Movie we centered the title and it fades to black.
IDENTS
A good example of idents from a slasher film are An American Werewolf in London (John Landis, 1981). The idents from this film look fairly outdated but the the simple animated letters are still effective, and they continue to be used commonly in modern slasher films. All 4 of our company idents involved this same technique and also some other animation and effects. This helped our idents look effective yet they were simple to make.
OPENING SHOTS
The first shot we show in our film opening is an establishing shot. This instantly anchors the mood, genre and location of the film. Our establishing shot is of the wooden cabins where the main part of our film is set. An establishing shot also helps get the audience into the film and the action. This same technique is used in many slasher openings, an example of this is Cherry Falls (Geoffrey Wright, 2009).
GROUP SHOT:
After the establishing shots in our production we thought it was vital to include a group shot to anchor the main characters. Also the dialogue that is used along side this will add to the exposition revealed in the early parts of the opening. It also introduces possible protagonist and antagonists to the audience.
FINAL GIRL AND SCREAM QUEEN
Carole Clover's theory of the final girl applies to the majority of films across the slasher genre, including our production. 'Charley' our final girl character follows this concept in a number of ways. Her name is unisex and she dresses very covered up and comes across a positive an very morally right person. She also has masculine attributes. The binary opposite of Charley is our scream queen Ashley. Ashley dresses more provocatively and has a lazy and negative attitude. She also comes across less immoral by ringing her dad to pick her up because she's bored instead of commemorating her dead friend. Both these characters are common stereotypes of the slasher genre. A good example of a final girl is Sydney Prescott from Scream (Wes Craven, 1996). An extremely famous example of a scream queen is Janet Leigh from Psycho.
NARRATIVE ENIGMA:
In our slasher opening we show narrative enigma whenever the killer is shown. By dressing the killer in a black hoodie the audience are never able to identify him, this along with the shots of only the killers feet gradually being cut into the action helps create narrative enigma. This same concept is used in lots of slasher films. A well known example is the Friday the 13th franchise where Jason is always seen wearing a mask to hide his identity.
SOUND
The sound we used in the killing sequence of our production is inspired from slashers such as Psycho (Alfred Hitchcock, 1960). We added string instruments that created drama and tensions and helped replicate the screams that would be heard. Psycho is a very famous example of this technique. Throughout our opening we used a mixture of diegetic and non diegetic sound to create tension as well as keeping it realistic.
CONCLUSION
Our audience feedback was positive and came across as getting our preferred reading. We were most worried about our killing scene not coming across convincingly, but our audience feedback didn't bring up any concern about this. Using conventions from past examples has helped us to achieve better verisimilatude.
Our group decided that certain aspects of our slasher opening would have to be similar to previous successful slasher films so that we could target a specific audience.
TITLES
The first titles displayed are 'Fireline presents', like in the slasher film Madhouse (William Butler, 2004) except in Madhouse's case it was 'Lions Gate Productions'. This is a commonly used convention. Also in our production we used a convention shown in slashers such as Urban Legend. We displayed 'A cupkate Production', similar to Urban Legend saying 'a Gina Matthews Production'. As shown in Scary Movie (Keenen Ivory Wayans, 2000), the title of the film is shown after the first killing. We did this in our slasher opening after the scream queens death and similarly to Scary Movie we centered the title and it fades to black.
IDENTS
A good example of idents from a slasher film are An American Werewolf in London (John Landis, 1981). The idents from this film look fairly outdated but the the simple animated letters are still effective, and they continue to be used commonly in modern slasher films. All 4 of our company idents involved this same technique and also some other animation and effects. This helped our idents look effective yet they were simple to make.
OPENING SHOTS
The first shot we show in our film opening is an establishing shot. This instantly anchors the mood, genre and location of the film. Our establishing shot is of the wooden cabins where the main part of our film is set. An establishing shot also helps get the audience into the film and the action. This same technique is used in many slasher openings, an example of this is Cherry Falls (Geoffrey Wright, 2009).
GROUP SHOT:
After the establishing shots in our production we thought it was vital to include a group shot to anchor the main characters. Also the dialogue that is used along side this will add to the exposition revealed in the early parts of the opening. It also introduces possible protagonist and antagonists to the audience.
FINAL GIRL AND SCREAM QUEEN
Carole Clover's theory of the final girl applies to the majority of films across the slasher genre, including our production. 'Charley' our final girl character follows this concept in a number of ways. Her name is unisex and she dresses very covered up and comes across a positive an very morally right person. She also has masculine attributes. The binary opposite of Charley is our scream queen Ashley. Ashley dresses more provocatively and has a lazy and negative attitude. She also comes across less immoral by ringing her dad to pick her up because she's bored instead of commemorating her dead friend. Both these characters are common stereotypes of the slasher genre. A good example of a final girl is Sydney Prescott from Scream (Wes Craven, 1996). An extremely famous example of a scream queen is Janet Leigh from Psycho.
NARRATIVE ENIGMA:
In our slasher opening we show narrative enigma whenever the killer is shown. By dressing the killer in a black hoodie the audience are never able to identify him, this along with the shots of only the killers feet gradually being cut into the action helps create narrative enigma. This same concept is used in lots of slasher films. A well known example is the Friday the 13th franchise where Jason is always seen wearing a mask to hide his identity.
SOUND
The sound we used in the killing sequence of our production is inspired from slashers such as Psycho (Alfred Hitchcock, 1960). We added string instruments that created drama and tensions and helped replicate the screams that would be heard. Psycho is a very famous example of this technique. Throughout our opening we used a mixture of diegetic and non diegetic sound to create tension as well as keeping it realistic.
CONCLUSION
Our audience feedback was positive and came across as getting our preferred reading. We were most worried about our killing scene not coming across convincingly, but our audience feedback didn't bring up any concern about this. Using conventions from past examples has helped us to achieve better verisimilatude.
Evaluation Q2 - Representations
How does your media product represent particular social groups?
SOCIAL CLASS AND STATUS
All the characters in our production are of a working/middle class. They speak the same, and don't dress completely different to each other, so they don't look different enough to class them as a different social status. The target audience is also working class, which helps the audience easily relate to the characters.
Here is the podcast version of this question:
There are 7 key areas of representation which can be analysed and applied to productions.
REGIONAL IDENTITY
Our film is set in West Yorkshire, therefore all the characters have a Yorkshire accent. They use typical teenage 'slang' language which attracts the target young adult audience. Because the production is set in Yorkshire, it is set in a very rural area to anchor the region.
AGE
All the characters in our media production are teenagers, including the killer. The age of the characters attracts the target audience of 15-24 year old's, as they can relate to the emotions and feelings expressed by the teenagers on screen. The clothes they are wearing also anchor their age, as they're clothes that a typical teenager would wear. A typical slasher film convention is that the authority figures and adults are useless. This convention is shown in our film opening, when the father of the scream queen does not answer his phone, signifying he is useless. The final girl is portrayed as the innocent and sensible character of the group, which shows that she is the leader of the group, and like the stereotypical final girl, she will eventually defeat the killer using her intelligence. The jock of the group comes across as the one who has a lazy negative attitude towards his peers, especially his girlfriend (the scream queen). The scream queen also has a negative attitude towards the situation, and ends up being separated from the group.The jock and scream queens attitudes are both binary opposites of the final girls positive attitude.
SEXUALITY
To reinforce a normative representation to the audience, we chose for all of the characters to be heterosexual. This is signified in our film opening with the scream queen and jock, by having them walk together at the back of the group and by having a photo of the couple on the background of the scream queens phone.
To reinforce a normative representation to the audience, we chose for all of the characters to be heterosexual. This is signified in our film opening with the scream queen and jock, by having them walk together at the back of the group and by having a photo of the couple on the background of the scream queens phone.
GENDER
Gender comes across strongly using binary opposites in our production. The scream queen and killer are binary opposites. The scream queen fits the stereotype of her role, as she is wearing a low cut vest top, and has long blonde hair. She is emotional and weak which is signified by being the first victim out of the group. The killer is the binary opposite of this, because he portrays no emotion. Although we used narrative enigma, it is still clear that there is an element of psychopathy about the killer. The killer also portrays strength and power as he succeeds at killing the scream queen. There are also binary opposites between the scream queen and final girl. Carole Clover's theory of the final girl and feminism in slasher films explains how the final girl takes the lead role as she has more masculine traits which are signified by her body being covered up. Our final girl follows this theory.
PHYSICAL ABILITY/DISABILITY
Again we are reinforcing a normative representation to the audience as all the characters are physically able. This was done because in our film production the group are walking in the woods, so having a disabled character would have made the situation less realistic.
Gender comes across strongly using binary opposites in our production. The scream queen and killer are binary opposites. The scream queen fits the stereotype of her role, as she is wearing a low cut vest top, and has long blonde hair. She is emotional and weak which is signified by being the first victim out of the group. The killer is the binary opposite of this, because he portrays no emotion. Although we used narrative enigma, it is still clear that there is an element of psychopathy about the killer. The killer also portrays strength and power as he succeeds at killing the scream queen. There are also binary opposites between the scream queen and final girl. Carole Clover's theory of the final girl and feminism in slasher films explains how the final girl takes the lead role as she has more masculine traits which are signified by her body being covered up. Our final girl follows this theory.
PHYSICAL ABILITY/DISABILITY
Again we are reinforcing a normative representation to the audience as all the characters are physically able. This was done because in our film production the group are walking in the woods, so having a disabled character would have made the situation less realistic.
REGIONAL IDENTITY
Our film is set in West Yorkshire, therefore all the characters have a Yorkshire accent. They use typical teenage 'slang' language which attracts the target young adult audience. Because the production is set in Yorkshire, it is set in a very rural area to anchor the region.
ETHNICITY
In our slasher opening, all the characters are white British, so there is no cultural diversity. There are very few slasher films with a culturally diverse cast, however Prom Night (Nelson McCormick, 2008) challenges this.
In our slasher opening, all the characters are white British, so there is no cultural diversity. There are very few slasher films with a culturally diverse cast, however Prom Night (Nelson McCormick, 2008) challenges this.
SOCIAL CLASS AND STATUS
All the characters in our production are of a working/middle class. They speak the same, and don't dress completely different to each other, so they don't look different enough to class them as a different social status. The target audience is also working class, which helps the audience easily relate to the characters.
Evaluation Q3 – Distribution
What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?
A film distributor is a company or a person who is responsible for the marketing of the film. Film distribution requires the materials and rights of the producer and the cooperation of the exhibitor to promote the film.
Our product is a low-budget indie slasher film, without any established actors/actresses so large Hollywood distributors like Warner Bros and Universal Pictures are not an option.
We have watched films like Sleepaway Camp and Friday the 13th and taken the idea of a camp setting, and the plot in our film has some similarities to films in the Friday the 13th franchise.
Digitisation is changing distribution massively and nowadays there are other ways of getting our film noticed. Social networks can play a huge part in getting our film recognition for the public. The world now spends more than 110 billion minutes on social networks and blog sites per month. Video sharing websites such as YouTube and Dailymotion are a great way to get low budget films like ours recognition. Using social networks to distribute our film will not only be much cheaper than finding a company that would distribute our film, we could possibly reach our target audience more easily, as a large amount of people who have YouTube accounts are young people.
Even though low budget films such as Donkey Punch were released into the cinema and even in parts of the United States, many indie films have a lot of difficulty finding a distributor. Most low budget indie films end up going straight to DVD, never making it to the cinema, as the cost of marketing and creating film prints is so high. Donkey Punch was not overly successful at the box office but made most money in DVD sales. The distributor for Donkey punch in the UK was Optimum Releasing. They have also distributed films such as Kill List which had a budget of £500k and was partly filmed in Sheffield, South Yorkshire. Kill List is one of the most recent films distributed. I think that Optimum Releasing would be a good company to distribute our film because they have experience distributing low budget indie films, and often succeed in getting cinematic releases for fairly low-budget films, for example Attack The Block (Joe Cornish, 2011) and The Awakening (Nick Murphy, 2011).
Even though low budget films such as Donkey Punch were released into the cinema and even in parts of the United States, many indie films have a lot of difficulty finding a distributor. Most low budget indie films end up going straight to DVD, never making it to the cinema, as the cost of marketing and creating film prints is so high. Donkey Punch was not overly successful at the box office but made most money in DVD sales. The distributor for Donkey punch in the UK was Optimum Releasing. They have also distributed films such as Kill List which had a budget of £500k and was partly filmed in Sheffield, South Yorkshire. Kill List is one of the most recent films distributed. I think that Optimum Releasing would be a good company to distribute our film because they have experience distributing low budget indie films, and often succeed in getting cinematic releases for fairly low-budget films, for example Attack The Block (Joe Cornish, 2011) and The Awakening (Nick Murphy, 2011).
Warp X is a distribution company based in Sheffield. They were also involved in the production and distribution of Donkey Punch. This company would also be an ideal distribution company for our film, as they also have experience distributing low-budget productions.
Evaluation Q4 - Target Audience
Who would be the audience for your media product?
When our group was deciding the plot of our film, we also had an idea in mind for our target audience. We decided that the target audience for Camp Ivy would be 15-24 years old. We looked at the BBFC guidelines which helped us to decide this as it shows a scene of violence and scenes of this nature would continue in the rest of the film.
Our target audience are also most likely to be British. Also as the characters are all from Yorkshire other countries might not be able to understand their accent as global audiences are used to British accents from the south of England. I think that our production is likely to be popular with more Northern people as they can relate to the characters more and it could seem more realistic.
Slasher films are known for being popular with teenage audiences. Its a genre that is fairly popular all over the world so this might attract other countries as a lot of teenagers would go camping, because it isn't just specific to British culture.
The secondary target audience would be 18-34 years old. I think that our production could be well received with this age group because the slasher genre has proved to be quite popular in this age group before.
Our target audience are also most likely to be British. Also as the characters are all from Yorkshire other countries might not be able to understand their accent as global audiences are used to British accents from the south of England. I think that our production is likely to be popular with more Northern people as they can relate to the characters more and it could seem more realistic.
Slasher films are known for being popular with teenage audiences. Its a genre that is fairly popular all over the world so this might attract other countries as a lot of teenagers would go camping, because it isn't just specific to British culture.
The secondary target audience would be 18-34 years old. I think that our production could be well received with this age group because the slasher genre has proved to be quite popular in this age group before.
Thursday, 2 May 2013
Evaluation Q5 - Mode of Address
How did you attract/address your audience?
I used the annotation tool on Youtube to answer this question on our final cut, to show how we achieved this. This is the video with annotations:
I used the annotation tool on Youtube to answer this question on our final cut, to show how we achieved this. This is the video with annotations:
Evaluation Q6 - Technologies
What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?
Here is a list of the technologies we have used:
HD video camera
Mac software:
Final Cut Pro
Livetype
Garageband
Blogger
Youtube
IMDB
We used LiveType to create our own idents, and then again to create our film ident. We found that at first it was quite hard to get used to but after a short time it became easier and was a very effective tool to help our idents look more professional.
Here is a list of the technologies we have used:
HD video camera
Mac software:
Final Cut Pro
Livetype
Garageband
Blogger
Youtube
IMDB
HD Camera
Throughout the process of creating our slasher opening, we have used many different technologies. We have used a HD Camera to film our slasher opening. This meant that the quality of our finished slasher opening was much better and altogether looked more professional. We tried using smartphones to film parts of our teaser trailer but the shots were more shaky and looked very amateur.Final Cut Pro
To edit our opening we used editing software Final Cut Pro. We also use Final Cut Pro to edit vodcasts, and our productions such as a rough cut. Final Cut Pro is good for quick and easy editing, and uploading footage from SD cards is very fast. Final Cut Pro also has built in effects which we used throughout the process of our slasher film. for example we used the Day into Night effect to make some shots look as though they were filmed when it was dark. We also used Final Cut Pro to make the titles and credits for our slasher opening.
LiveType
We used LiveType to create our own idents, and then again to create our film ident. We found that at first it was quite hard to get used to but after a short time it became easier and was a very effective tool to help our idents look more professional.Garageband
Garageband was useful when we wanted to add sound to our idents. It was easy to add sound effects to our idents and build lots of layers of sound to make it more professional. We also used Garageband to soundtrack our entire film opening. It was easy to create the sound and music we wanted for our opening using mainly the string instruments. However there is a lot of choice when choosing an instrument and a sound so picking the right one for our slasher film opening after listening to them all the options can take a while.Blogger
We have used Blogger to document the research and planning of our Slasher opening. It is easy to link to sources on the internet and upload our own work so everything is all in one place. Blogger is very useful when communicating with other people in our production group, and we can easily embed videos from their blogs on to our own. Also links lists make everything easy to find so you don't have to search through the blog archive.
YouTube
We used YouTube as an easy platform to upload vodcasts, teaser trailers, rough cuts and our final product. It means that a wide audience can watch our productions and we can easily get feedback and constructive criticism. We also looked at a few coursework productions from past years to get ideas about what we should and shouldn't do within our own production. Also it is very easy to embed YouTube videos into Blogger posts, and share videos through other social networks such as Facebook.
IMDb
IMDb is extremely useful to look up a range of information about films we are researching such as distributors, directors and production companies. It has a lot of information that is useful for us as indie film makers such as budget and box office figures of films similar to ours.Wednesday, 1 May 2013
Evaluation Q7 - Learnt Since Prelim
Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?
My preliminary task:
This is our final cut:
RESEARCH
When doing our preliminary task we hadn't done any research into shot types, filming, editing, SFX, mise-en-scene etc. Because the prelim prelim had no particular genre this was fine, but for our specific production we had to do a lot of research into all aspects of the slasher genre, to try and get the most accurate portrayal of a slasher film. The prelim definitely helped us when learning how to work with the camera, the different shot types and how to use the editing software. At first when doing the prelim we did struggle with all these aspects, but when it came to filming and editing multiple rough cuts we got very used to how everything worked, and what would look most effective for the slasher genre.
PLANNING + PITCHING
The planning for the preliminary task was very minimal, as all we had to do was quickly write down the shot types we were going to use and roughly what we would say. We didn't think much at all about the narrative, just something very basic so we could focus more on the cinematography. However for our production we had to make call sheets, story boards and lots of plans to make sure we were prepared for the shoots and managed our time properly. Because we had actors involved we had to make sure none of their time was wasted and we knew exactly which shots needed to be done and at what time. As our rough cuts progressed, we improved on this and the very last shoot we did was the most productive and best planned and organised. Unlike the prelim we did multiple shoots and we had to constantly evaluate and criticise our own footage to see if it needed to be re-shot or improved. Originally when we did the prelim we didn't have to pitch an idea, but for our production we spent time planning an idea and pitching it to the class to persuade people to work as a team on your production. A first this seemed quite daunting but the most effective way of hearing everybody's ideas and constructive criticism.
ACTORS
In mine and Hannah's prelim, me and Poppy were the actors in it as it was easier and quick to film. In our production we used different actors for different rough cuts before deciding our final cast. We wrote scripts for our cast and we gave it to them in advance so they had a good understanding of what we needed them to do and say exactly. Also we tried to cast our actors as close to the stereotype of their character as possible, for example choosing a blonde to play the scream queen. None of the actors we chose were very experienced, but they all acted very professionally and were very willing to help with our production. However, our production could have been improved if we had very experienced actors.
MISE-EN-SCENE, COSTUMES + PROPS
There was no mise-en-scene, costumes, props or set dressing. However our production was the opposite. We changed many aspects to improve our mise-en-scene for example we changed the scream queen's phone background to anchor that her and the jock are a couple. We asked the individual characters what to wear and we planned this in advance, as well as taking precautions such as buying extra white tops for the scream queen so the killing scene could be reshot if necessary. As for props we had to take the knife as well as the phone used and we had to purchase flowers for the group to put on 'Mikeys' grave. Every time we did re-shoots it was helpful that we knew exactly what shots were needing to be done so we could take the appropriate props for them. For our killing scene to look realistic we had to use fake blood. We made our own fake blood, because it was cheap, easy and it looked very realistic. Here are our posts about all these mentioned in more detail:
LOCATION
The location for our final production was 2 different places. For our original rough cut we filmed the whole thing at Linton Camp. However for our second shoot and third shoot we thought it would be more effective to edit in footage from a wooded area as it came across a scarier and more realistic. To film our wooded footage we went to some local woods. Filming in the woods was quite challenging as we had to walk quite far to the location and we often had to stop filming due to it being in the area of a public footpath and people and dogs sometimes walked or were heard in shot. However we filmed the prelim at lunchtime inside so there was minimal noise.
ROUGH CUTS
We only did one prelim, and we didn't think it was necessary to have any rough cuts or re-film, however we filmed and re-edited our production several times. Here are the rough cuts for our final production:
AUDIENCE FEEDBACK
For our production we had all of our rough cuts on youtube for audience feedback, as well as screening them to people our age and videoing their reactions. From these reactions we improved our production, especially their critique on what kind of sound we could use to create suspense. As our first rough cut didn't have good feedback this is when we made the decision to reshoot the whole production. This was a very good decision as the final product was much better than it would have been if we had used that majority of that original footage.
SOUND
IDENTS
In our production we included 4 idents, mine, Poppys and Kates and a company one for us all. This made our production look more professional and they also helped introduce the slasher genre with the last few idents. In our prelim we didn't use and idents, or special effects. However, in our production we used a mixture of effects and transitions in our work to help improve it. We used layering over our killing scene to help make it look more realistic and to show the groups reactions at the same time as the scream queen being stabbed.
SHOT TYPES
In our preliminary task the main shot types we concentrated on using was, match on action, 180 degree rule, over the shoulder shot and shot reverse shot. In our production we tried to include as much shot variation as possible as the slasher genre is quick paced and this can only be maintained by many shots. We tried to use our location to our advantage when thinking of shot types, framing them around the trees in the woods. We also tried to use a dutch angle in our production during the chase scene. This is used to signify that something isn't quite right and that the scream queen was in danger. As we were new to filming with the prelim task the camera was not held steady. As this is part of the assessment criteria we made sure we tried to stop this in our production. We did this by using a tripod for the stationery shots and a fig rig for moving or tracking shots. By doing this it majorly improved the stability of our shots, and any mistakes we had made were easy to edit it out post filming.
ROLES
In our prelim the group of 3 we worked, nobody had specific roles. We took it in turns to each experiment with the filming and editing. When doing our production we thought we would better organised if we were all gave specific roles. Poppy was director, Kate was producer and I was the cinematographer. We all contributed with the editing and made sure that major decisions were discussed as a team so we made sure we were all happy with final decisions. This is also meant that there was three people watching the editing to make sure there were no continuity errors or mistakes that needed to be cut out or improved in our editing.
In conclusion, we have learnt a lot since we started our preliminary task, but it was a major part in starting us to discover all the necessary things to be thought about when creating our own film opening. I think we have learnt most about cinematography and editing, but also a lot about the organisation and how to be productive when organising shoots. There is a huge difference between the quality of our preliminary task and our final cut of Camp Ivy.
Here is a timeline of all the videos we shot and edited so you can see the gradual improvements we have made:
My preliminary task:
This is our final cut:
RESEARCH
When doing our preliminary task we hadn't done any research into shot types, filming, editing, SFX, mise-en-scene etc. Because the prelim prelim had no particular genre this was fine, but for our specific production we had to do a lot of research into all aspects of the slasher genre, to try and get the most accurate portrayal of a slasher film. The prelim definitely helped us when learning how to work with the camera, the different shot types and how to use the editing software. At first when doing the prelim we did struggle with all these aspects, but when it came to filming and editing multiple rough cuts we got very used to how everything worked, and what would look most effective for the slasher genre.
PLANNING + PITCHING
The planning for the preliminary task was very minimal, as all we had to do was quickly write down the shot types we were going to use and roughly what we would say. We didn't think much at all about the narrative, just something very basic so we could focus more on the cinematography. However for our production we had to make call sheets, story boards and lots of plans to make sure we were prepared for the shoots and managed our time properly. Because we had actors involved we had to make sure none of their time was wasted and we knew exactly which shots needed to be done and at what time. As our rough cuts progressed, we improved on this and the very last shoot we did was the most productive and best planned and organised. Unlike the prelim we did multiple shoots and we had to constantly evaluate and criticise our own footage to see if it needed to be re-shot or improved. Originally when we did the prelim we didn't have to pitch an idea, but for our production we spent time planning an idea and pitching it to the class to persuade people to work as a team on your production. A first this seemed quite daunting but the most effective way of hearing everybody's ideas and constructive criticism.
ACTORS
In mine and Hannah's prelim, me and Poppy were the actors in it as it was easier and quick to film. In our production we used different actors for different rough cuts before deciding our final cast. We wrote scripts for our cast and we gave it to them in advance so they had a good understanding of what we needed them to do and say exactly. Also we tried to cast our actors as close to the stereotype of their character as possible, for example choosing a blonde to play the scream queen. None of the actors we chose were very experienced, but they all acted very professionally and were very willing to help with our production. However, our production could have been improved if we had very experienced actors.
MISE-EN-SCENE, COSTUMES + PROPS
There was no mise-en-scene, costumes, props or set dressing. However our production was the opposite. We changed many aspects to improve our mise-en-scene for example we changed the scream queen's phone background to anchor that her and the jock are a couple. We asked the individual characters what to wear and we planned this in advance, as well as taking precautions such as buying extra white tops for the scream queen so the killing scene could be reshot if necessary. As for props we had to take the knife as well as the phone used and we had to purchase flowers for the group to put on 'Mikeys' grave. Every time we did re-shoots it was helpful that we knew exactly what shots were needing to be done so we could take the appropriate props for them. For our killing scene to look realistic we had to use fake blood. We made our own fake blood, because it was cheap, easy and it looked very realistic. Here are our posts about all these mentioned in more detail:
LOCATION
The location for our final production was 2 different places. For our original rough cut we filmed the whole thing at Linton Camp. However for our second shoot and third shoot we thought it would be more effective to edit in footage from a wooded area as it came across a scarier and more realistic. To film our wooded footage we went to some local woods. Filming in the woods was quite challenging as we had to walk quite far to the location and we often had to stop filming due to it being in the area of a public footpath and people and dogs sometimes walked or were heard in shot. However we filmed the prelim at lunchtime inside so there was minimal noise.
ROUGH CUTS
We only did one prelim, and we didn't think it was necessary to have any rough cuts or re-film, however we filmed and re-edited our production several times. Here are the rough cuts for our final production:
AUDIENCE FEEDBACK
For our production we had all of our rough cuts on youtube for audience feedback, as well as screening them to people our age and videoing their reactions. From these reactions we improved our production, especially their critique on what kind of sound we could use to create suspense. As our first rough cut didn't have good feedback this is when we made the decision to reshoot the whole production. This was a very good decision as the final product was much better than it would have been if we had used that majority of that original footage.
SOUND
For our prelim the only sound involved was the diegetic sound of what we were saying. In our production, as well as enhancing diegetic sound for affect and turning down diegetic sound when necessary, we also spent time on non diegetic soundtrack to improve it. We used quiet music throughout our production to make it more intense and eerie. Also we uses used a specific sound whenever the killer is shown. In the killing scene we used string instruments which helped replicate the sounds of screams that were heard.
IDENTS
In our production we included 4 idents, mine, Poppys and Kates and a company one for us all. This made our production look more professional and they also helped introduce the slasher genre with the last few idents. In our prelim we didn't use and idents, or special effects. However, in our production we used a mixture of effects and transitions in our work to help improve it. We used layering over our killing scene to help make it look more realistic and to show the groups reactions at the same time as the scream queen being stabbed.
SHOT TYPES
In our preliminary task the main shot types we concentrated on using was, match on action, 180 degree rule, over the shoulder shot and shot reverse shot. In our production we tried to include as much shot variation as possible as the slasher genre is quick paced and this can only be maintained by many shots. We tried to use our location to our advantage when thinking of shot types, framing them around the trees in the woods. We also tried to use a dutch angle in our production during the chase scene. This is used to signify that something isn't quite right and that the scream queen was in danger. As we were new to filming with the prelim task the camera was not held steady. As this is part of the assessment criteria we made sure we tried to stop this in our production. We did this by using a tripod for the stationery shots and a fig rig for moving or tracking shots. By doing this it majorly improved the stability of our shots, and any mistakes we had made were easy to edit it out post filming.
ROLES
In our prelim the group of 3 we worked, nobody had specific roles. We took it in turns to each experiment with the filming and editing. When doing our production we thought we would better organised if we were all gave specific roles. Poppy was director, Kate was producer and I was the cinematographer. We all contributed with the editing and made sure that major decisions were discussed as a team so we made sure we were all happy with final decisions. This is also meant that there was three people watching the editing to make sure there were no continuity errors or mistakes that needed to be cut out or improved in our editing.
In conclusion, we have learnt a lot since we started our preliminary task, but it was a major part in starting us to discover all the necessary things to be thought about when creating our own film opening. I think we have learnt most about cinematography and editing, but also a lot about the organisation and how to be productive when organising shoots. There is a huge difference between the quality of our preliminary task and our final cut of Camp Ivy.
Here is a timeline of all the videos we shot and edited so you can see the gradual improvements we have made:
Thursday, 25 April 2013
Slasher Soundtrack - Cherry Falls
Cherry Falls 2009 Geoffrey WrightThe first sounds we hear are church bells and choir singing, whilst there is a shot of a church. The sound is both diagetic and non diagetic as we can see the church but not the choir. When the shot changes to a waterfall, here is still diagetic sound as we can hear it flowing. The church bells slowly fade away and the music changes to a fast tempo beat to increase the heart rate and therefore tension. It also creates an audio bridge to the next scene.
The next scene has diagetic sound of a girl and a boy talking. Fast paced music slowly gets louder to build the tension up to the killing scene. Loud drum sounds are used when the killer enters the scene, further building tension.
The sounds of the car door opening are exaggerated, and the music is fast paced and loud all the way through the killing. When the boy is hit by the killer the sound effect is loud and also exaggerated.
During the killing the noises of the knife slashing and stabbing are loud and inter-cut with the girls screams. The music is quite high pitched and fast paced.
When the girl goes to lock the car door the sound is exaggerated and the music gets quieter before the second killing happens. During this killing scene, the same music is played as before.
Here is the Trailer for Cherry Falls:
PP- Script - Second Shoot
Charley: Guys, We are nearly there.
Ashley: I can't be arsed.
Ryan: Whatever
Patrick: (rambling quietly about the surroundings)
Charley: Lets have a break here.
Ashley: Argh I can't be arsed going any further, I'm going to ring my Dad and get him to pick me up.
Ryan: Oh Shut up will ya.
Charley: It's only 5 oclock I think we should hang on until we get a bit further.
Everyone but Ashley stands up and walks on.
Ashley: (on phone) Hi Dad, I am really sick of being here, can you come pick me up? call me back when you get this.
- cuts back to friends -
Charley: Look, I can't believe it was a year ago today (looking at grave)
- cuts back to Ashley -
Charley: ASHLEY?
Ryan: Was that Ashley?!
Ashley: I can't be arsed.
Ryan: Whatever
Patrick: (rambling quietly about the surroundings)
Charley: Lets have a break here.
Ashley: Argh I can't be arsed going any further, I'm going to ring my Dad and get him to pick me up.
Ryan: Oh Shut up will ya.
Charley: It's only 5 oclock I think we should hang on until we get a bit further.
Everyone but Ashley stands up and walks on.
Ashley: (on phone) Hi Dad, I am really sick of being here, can you come pick me up? call me back when you get this.
- cuts back to friends -
Charley: Look, I can't believe it was a year ago today (looking at grave)
- cuts back to Ashley -
Charley: ASHLEY?
Ryan: Was that Ashley?!
Tuesday, 23 April 2013
PP- Casting, Characters & Mise-en-scene
CASTING + CHARACTERS
In our production you will see 5 characters altogether:
- Scream Queen
- Final Girl
- Scream Queen's boyfriend
- 'Outsider' of the group
- Killer
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| stereotypical scream queens |
For the scream queen we plan to cast a very stereotypical scream queen. The qualities that we associate with a scream queen are blonde hair, very confident, has a boy friend and usually discusses stuff in the narrative that may be seen as immoral. We are going to cast someone who is blonde, could easily play the part and convincingly come across to the audience as this, however the narrative and her confidence is more important than her appearance.
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| archetype final girl Laurie Strode |
Scream Queen's Boyfriend:
| 'Derek' in Scream 2 |
Outsider of the Group: The outsider should be male, and look like he doesn't really belong in the group. He should not really care about his appearance and almost be a binary opposite of the 'jock' like scream queens boyfriend.
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| Jason Voorhees in Friday the 13th |
MISE-EN-SCENE
We will show mise-en-scene in our production by set dressing the area in which we are filming with small signifiers for the audience to pick up on. We will most likely set our opening in or around a forest area as this has connotations with dark/evil like the killer character.
Tuesday, 9 April 2013
Audience Feedback
We asked Daisy and Alys to watch our final production (- sound) to get some feedback and see things we could possibly improve. Daisy and Alys are both within our target age audience.(15-24)
As Alys was in the opening. she found some of the group scenes quite funny. However, Daisy though that the group shots looked fairly realistic, and was able to tell the roles that each character was meant to be playing.
Both Daisy and Alys though that the stalking scene was effective, but the chase could be improved slightly, and the whole stalking would be more effective and scarier with sound/music. When they were watching the killing scene, they thought that the blood looked realistic and the fast paced editing made the killing more frightening. However, they said that the killing would be improved a lot when we add sound.
Sunday, 7 April 2013
Costumes
In our slasher opening there are a total of 5 characters. We chose costumes which we thought would suit the characters and their roles best.
Ashley: Scream Queen
Black jeans - the scream queen wore black jeans to show a contrast between her and the final girl character, who is wearing more traditional blue jeans
White vest top - we thought that the scream queen should wear a white, revealing vest top to signify her character's personality.
Black boots: the scream queens boots are unsuitable for walking in the woods, again showing her personality and role as the scream queen.
Charley: Final Girl
Plaid shirt, buttoned up to the collar - the final girl is wearing a plaid shirt which is buttoned up to the top to show that she is not trying to be provocative. The shirt is more practical than it is fashionable.
It also shows a contrast to the scream queen who is wearing a low cut vest top.
Blue jeans - we though that the final girl should be wearing blue jeans to show a contrast between her and the scream queen who is wearing black, more fashionable jeans.
Hair in pigtails - we thought it would be a good idea to have the final girl wear pigtails to show that she is innocent.
Glasses - the final girl is wearing glasses to make her look more intellectual.
Brown boots - look like sturdy well made boots that would be classed as appropriate for walking in the woods.
Bag - She is the one in the group having the sensible responsibility of carrying the bag, and is happy to do so.
Patrick: Outsider
baggy jeans - Doesn't care about his image very much, comes across as not wanting to be fashionable and might be purposefully doing this so he isn't associated with the group.
unfashionable jacket - This anchors the point about his jeans.
Ryan: Scream Queens boyfriend/Jock
sports hoodie - He cares a lot about his image and tries to match what he thinks is socially acceptable and what his 'jock' friends would wear.
jeans - the jeans that the jock are wearing are trendier in contrast to the Outsider of the group.
trainers - his trainers show how he thinks that wearing branded trainers will change what other people think of him and how popular what he wears will make him. This suggests he is very self obsessed.
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| scream queens outfit |
Black jeans - the scream queen wore black jeans to show a contrast between her and the final girl character, who is wearing more traditional blue jeans
White vest top - we thought that the scream queen should wear a white, revealing vest top to signify her character's personality.
Black boots: the scream queens boots are unsuitable for walking in the woods, again showing her personality and role as the scream queen.
Charley: Final Girl
Plaid shirt, buttoned up to the collar - the final girl is wearing a plaid shirt which is buttoned up to the top to show that she is not trying to be provocative. The shirt is more practical than it is fashionable.
It also shows a contrast to the scream queen who is wearing a low cut vest top.
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| outsider and final girls outfits |
Hair in pigtails - we thought it would be a good idea to have the final girl wear pigtails to show that she is innocent.
Glasses - the final girl is wearing glasses to make her look more intellectual.
Brown boots - look like sturdy well made boots that would be classed as appropriate for walking in the woods.
Bag - She is the one in the group having the sensible responsibility of carrying the bag, and is happy to do so.
Patrick: Outsider
baggy jeans - Doesn't care about his image very much, comes across as not wanting to be fashionable and might be purposefully doing this so he isn't associated with the group.
unfashionable jacket - This anchors the point about his jeans.
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| Jocks outfit |
Ryan: Scream Queens boyfriend/Jock
sports hoodie - He cares a lot about his image and tries to match what he thinks is socially acceptable and what his 'jock' friends would wear.
jeans - the jeans that the jock are wearing are trendier in contrast to the Outsider of the group.
trainers - his trainers show how he thinks that wearing branded trainers will change what other people think of him and how popular what he wears will make him. This suggests he is very self obsessed.
Slasher Overview Vodcast Notes
Early slasher films
50s and 60s most horror was either gothic or monsters 'creature features' (universal)
hammer horror movies - were dominant in the 60s and the main characters were upper class, mature adults
last house on the left and tcm and black christmas - used younger, everyday normal people.
hammer horror, usually looks like its filmed on a theatrical stage
but early slasher movies last house on the left, tcm used portable cameras so it looked more realistic, not stagey.
PSYCHO and PEEPING TOM didnt start the genre - people thought that it was 'sick' and so the slasher genre didnt catch on until the 70s with films such as HALLOWEEN and TCM
hammer horror films were pushed out of the industry by low budget indie films which made hammer movies look stupid.
PSYCHO became an archetype for all other slasher films, the knife in the shower scene is the first thing we see of the 'slasher' genre.
TEXAS CHAINSAW MASSACRE- More gore and realistic violence, same as in LAST HOUSE ON THE LEFT
BLACK CHRISTMAS - (1974) Bob Clark - All the film is set in one place, reduced costs massively. First film to use the killers point of view, even though HALLOWEEN was credited as the first film to use this. Narrative enigma used in BLACK CHRISTMAS
Jamie Lee Curtis - starred in PROM NIGHT and TERROR TRAIN- both post HALLOWEEN films
Female lead role - to attract a male and female audience
SCREAM- Final Girl signified with brunette hair, childish bedroom
PEEPING TOM, 1960 Michael Powell Put the audience into the killers perspective - prototype -slasher
Higher levels of realism
NIGHTMARE ON ELM STREET, HALLOWEEN, FRIDAY THE 13TH & LEPRECHAUN- all have supernatural elements
post modern slasher (taken to the extreme, hybrid between genres, intertextuality) -
intertextuality between SCREAM and SCARY MOVIE
New Nightmare - slasher about a slasher - self referential
Exception to Todorov - there isnt a new equilibrium at the end, the character Michael Myers disappears after being shot, then Halloween 2 is carried on straight after the first film ends.
False scare adds comedy - like a practical joke
MUSIC in slasher films
High notes - increase the heatbeat, increases tension
long drawn out notes - subconciously hold your breath
horror/scares will disappear without music - commutation test in PSYCHO without the music wouldnt be scary at all.
PSYCHO - Hitchcock - music in the shower scene was just one note but with 40 violins
Ratings
death of stranger - made for tv movie rate 12
15-24 - youth (primary audience)
25-34 - mature youth (secondary audience)
50s and 60s most horror was either gothic or monsters 'creature features' (universal)
hammer horror movies - were dominant in the 60s and the main characters were upper class, mature adults
last house on the left and tcm and black christmas - used younger, everyday normal people.
hammer horror, usually looks like its filmed on a theatrical stage
but early slasher movies last house on the left, tcm used portable cameras so it looked more realistic, not stagey.
PSYCHO and PEEPING TOM didnt start the genre - people thought that it was 'sick' and so the slasher genre didnt catch on until the 70s with films such as HALLOWEEN and TCM
hammer horror films were pushed out of the industry by low budget indie films which made hammer movies look stupid.
PSYCHO became an archetype for all other slasher films, the knife in the shower scene is the first thing we see of the 'slasher' genre.
TEXAS CHAINSAW MASSACRE- More gore and realistic violence, same as in LAST HOUSE ON THE LEFT
BLACK CHRISTMAS - (1974) Bob Clark - All the film is set in one place, reduced costs massively. First film to use the killers point of view, even though HALLOWEEN was credited as the first film to use this. Narrative enigma used in BLACK CHRISTMAS
Jamie Lee Curtis - starred in PROM NIGHT and TERROR TRAIN- both post HALLOWEEN films
Female lead role - to attract a male and female audience
SCREAM- Final Girl signified with brunette hair, childish bedroom
PEEPING TOM, 1960 Michael Powell Put the audience into the killers perspective - prototype -slasher
Higher levels of realism
NIGHTMARE ON ELM STREET, HALLOWEEN, FRIDAY THE 13TH & LEPRECHAUN- all have supernatural elements
post modern slasher (taken to the extreme, hybrid between genres, intertextuality) -
intertextuality between SCREAM and SCARY MOVIE
New Nightmare - slasher about a slasher - self referential
Exception to Todorov - there isnt a new equilibrium at the end, the character Michael Myers disappears after being shot, then Halloween 2 is carried on straight after the first film ends.
False scare adds comedy - like a practical joke
MUSIC in slasher films
High notes - increase the heatbeat, increases tension
long drawn out notes - subconciously hold your breath
horror/scares will disappear without music - commutation test in PSYCHO without the music wouldnt be scary at all.
PSYCHO - Hitchcock - music in the shower scene was just one note but with 40 violins
Ratings
death of stranger - made for tv movie rate 12
15-24 - youth (primary audience)
25-34 - mature youth (secondary audience)
Microdrama Finished Film and Reflection
This is the finished microdrama. It runs for 2mins 2secs. I think that we could have improved the overall look of our microdrama by getting a better variety of shots. as there are a few very long takes which take away the suspense of the film. However i think that the live news broadcast was very effective.
Sunday, 31 March 2013
Saturday, 30 March 2013
Audience and Ratings
BBFC Age Ratings: http://milliej2013.blogspot.co.uk/2013/03/kh-bbfc-age-ratings.html
Friday the 13th (Marcus Nispel, 2009) is rated as an 18 in the UK but the ratings are different worldwide from 12 to 18+. Although our production has a similar plot line and some violent scenes of the same nature (e.g stabbing), the content is not as explicit, which shows why the age rating of 15 for Camp Ivy is suitable for a younger teenage audience. IA 15 age rating for a production like Camp Ivy would be suitable, as it attracts a teenage audience, yet not too young for scenes of a violent nature.
Another film which has influenced our production is Eden Lake (James Watkins, 2008).Eden Lake also has an age rating of 18 in the UK, and differs from 12 to 18+ worldwide. In Eden Lake:
'A boy, around 10 years old is doused in petrol, A tire is thrown over his head and he is burnt alive. His screams can be heard yet he is not seen burning. Only from a distance we see him yet no detail can be seen at the distance'.
We do not have scenes at this level of violence in our production, which again proves our age rating is suitable.
Thursday, 28 March 2013
PP - Camp Ivy Rough Cut 1
This is our first rough cut of our film Camp Ivy. By making this rough cut we have found it easier to establish which part of its don't work and what we could change to make it look more effective. Also from doing this we saw which parts of our production worked well and knew what we definitely want to keep in our final production.
From making this rough cut we saw that our narrative lacked anchorage, and a lot of what happens isn't clear, and may cause the audience some confusion. An example of this is when the chase scene starts. The final girl is in a wooded area but it isn't very clear as to why she starts running. We wanted it to come across that she noticed she was being stalked, but this didn't come across very strongly.
We also thought that due to the acting not being very strong we thought there was an unnecessary amount of speech, that makes the production come across more amateur. An example of this is when they are talking about their friend Mikey who died there the previous year. We intend to get shots of the friends putting flowers on a grave or somewhere at the camp to try and signify his death that way and this will hopefully improve our opening.
The inside of the buildings looked very derelict and looked quite effective. However, we probably didn't use the building to their full potential and should have used them for a flashback of how Mikey died or involved more of the chase involving the buildings, as they were one of the main reasons for us choosing this location.
Overall, doing this rough cut has helped us get an overall impression of how we want our production to eventually look and helped us decide what worked and what didn't. We plan to upload this initial rough cut to social networking sites. By doing this we will get feedback from our target audience and see if they agree on the same areas that need to be improved and if they have any other problems or queries about it that we have not yet noticed.
KH - BBFC Age Ratings
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| BBFC Classifications |
Examiners for the BBFC classify films for theatrical release using guidelines. The examiners look at the following issues:
- discrimination
- drugs
- horror
- sex
- nudity
- language
- imitable behaviour
- sexual violence
- violence
- theme
- context
- tone
- impact on audiences feelings
- format e.g. DVDs create a higher risk of underage viewing.
- strong violence
- frequent strong language
- portrayals of sexual activity
- strong verbal references to sex
- sexual nudity
- brief scenees of sexual violence or verbal references to sexual violence
- discriminatory language or behaviour
- drug taking
PP - Actors and Casting
Actors and Casting
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| Sydney Prescott - Scream |
Alys
We cast Alys as the final girl as she has dark brown hair which is comparable to final girls from a lot of slasher films. She also has done a lot of drama which meant we could trust her to act well and work well when given direction.
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| Alys |
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| Ben (middle) |
Ben
We cast Ben as the outsider of the group as he was willing to play this part and when asked to found it easy to portray this character.
Danny
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| jock (Dylan) from All the Boys love Mandy Lane |
We cast Danny as the Jock of the group as he also has had some experience with acting and found it easy to switch into the role of a Jock. Being good friends with people in the group meant he was very willing to participate and like Ben and Alys listened to our direction well and understood what we wanted to achieve.
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| Danny |
Poppy
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| scream queens |
Poppy played the part of the scream queen as she is blonde (fitting the scream queen stereotype) and the opening to our film was based around the scream queen being the victim it made it a lot quicker and more productive to shoot when i knew exactly what we wanted to achieve and what shot variety was needed. It also made it easier if anything needed to be reshot as we would just need me and not have to ask everybody else to give up free time and volunteer again.
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| Poppy |
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